Qualities like mental focus and dexterity are very important in some sports. This has led some to propose that playing video games should be recognized as an Olympic sport. Write a paragraph in English giving your own opinion on this proposal, with appropriate reasons and examples.
Seeing playing the video games, it seems in Japan, has not yet been recognized as one of sports. Many senior people think of playing the video games as a mere hobby and many parents will not want their young children to be absorbed in the video games. However, if we see playing the vide games as one of sports, it has some advantages similar to those which conventional sports have. For example, players have to train themselves in order to make the best of their physical strength, concentration and instantaneous force, as well as they do in conventional sports. ☆ Next, audience can be as excited to watch the games as conventional sports. Many people enjoy playing the video games as a hobby, so even people who watch the tournament for the first time can enjoy the game tournament soon. This new kind of sports can have more potential lovers than we expect. ☆
全部で151語・・・多いようなので ☆ではさまれた部分を除けば、99語になります。
注意事項は以下のとおり。
① want to ~(~したい)は使えるけど、want O to ~(Oに~してもらいたい)は使いこなせない人がけっこういます。たしか、中3で習います。
② 繰り返しを避けるthatの複数形。ここではadvantagesの繰り返しを回避するために使いました。
I am for there being more security cameras in the town, because they can be used for accurate analysis when some trouble or traffic accident happenes. Accurate analysis will be necessary in deciding which side is to blame at what rate. If a traffic accident happens where there is no security camera, people involved in it will have to discuss the responsibility, which will probably become an annoying discussion.
注意すべき文法事項は、
前置詞forが形容詞的意味「~に賛成して」を持ち、その前置詞の目的語としてThere is S 構文を動名詞化してあります。見慣れない形ですが、There is S構文は、動名詞・不定詞・分詞に変えることができます!
Certainly security cameras are helpful, but if the number of security cameras is too big, some of people who live in the place there are many security cameras will feel always watched. They may feel stressed every day. It is annoying to always feel stressed near one's own house so I am against increasing the number of security cameras in the town.